Corner of Your Eye (8/14)

I'm not completely happy with this--it's a bit lopsided and there's some definite mood whiplash that I'm not sure what to do about, but the stupid sticky keys are driving me crazy, so this is probably as good as it's going to get for now.

Complete chapter list: 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 11 | 12 | 13 | 14

The story is also available in one document on my website: Corner of Your Eye

( Part 8 )